Adi Parva: Churning of the Ocean | Amruta Patil
Worth its weight in gold
To know if a tale is worth its weight in gold, check if it reveals itself threefold. In your bloodstream. In the town square. In the turning of galaxies. If it does: Gold. If it makes you giddy just to think of the scope of the tale: Gold.” With these words in the preface, Amruta Patil sets a ruthlessly high bar for her retelling of the Mahabharat in sequential art.
The epic itself, of course, has proven 24-carat true over its centuries of re-forging and burnishing, but a reteller retains enough power to warp the wondrous into the banal. Thankfully, Patil’s labour of love, which fans of her previous graphic novel Kari have been waiting for since 2008, meets her own standards.
Proof threefold: When her Ganga stepped off the page in vivacious charcoal strokes to point out that “this matter of stealing cattle always ends badly”, my bloodstream pulsed with the mimetic reality that believers in the Mahabharat live with; this was neither hagiographic nor exoticized. Proof of the publicly shared appeal in the town square mandi of attractive retellings came when the bellboy at my hotel asked to see the book, and flipping through appreciatively, stopped, rather to my discomfort, at a tasteful pastel of Pandu and Madri making love.
Adi Parva: Churning of the Ocean: HarperCollins, 276 pages, Rs799.
It is a pleasure to sink into a retelling that is not unduly defensive about balancing spiritual passion with scientific rationality. Because Patil writes the way most of us live with the story—as though it is an elderly ajji or nani whose gnarled hands have given us oil massages and mouthfuls of dal-chawal, with a body familiar from snuggles and shoulder-rides, the flab and the bones alike smelling familiarly of talcum powder and sweat, whose politics and morality you may rage at with your feminism and Marxism but whose loyalty and devotion to the family is demonstrated through copious food-feeding and whose ancient mango-stealing past commands the reverence of feet-touching.
Her Mahabharat wanders through memoryscapes—now Vinata and Kadru are debating the blackness of a white horse’s tail, over there Janmejaya stews over his earth-scorching yagna, here people wander in and out of Ganga’s story demanding digressions about dogs or devas and meanwhile Ashwatthama broods wordless under the tree.
The best kathakars know that only a very shallow world can be fully explained, but rather, that contradictions and mysteries must populate the tale to provide opportunities for confusion and empathy. Patil embraces the multiple conflicting realities that make up the Mahabharat—she sometimes argues with it, sometimes provides sly interjections, but never for a moment did I sense that she has stopped believing in the urgent reality of it. Like a classical dancer who uses a 13th century padam with 19th century reconstructed hastas and 21st century lights to talk about a love for Krishna that is at once referencing a mythic past and a continuous present, Patil’s art swirls around charcoals and pastels, to collages on newsprint, to visual allusions across boundaries: Aphrodite arising out of the water, Tibetan lotuses, double-helix DNA, Orion in the night sky, snakes and ladders. Gandhari wears a kaftan while Kashmiri and Central Asian embroideries dance across the page border, Kunti wears a Bengali white sari with red border, while Madri is in a salwar-kameez.
There is meticulous craft behind Patil’s paean to this tale, and this is a graphic novel in the truest sense of the term because her art and her words come together like diamonds to show different facets of the same rainbow-lit characters (one of the small moving moments is a teeny Garuda bowing down while a Vishnu mask hovers in the background, and Patil writes about master sword makers who are relentless with their priceless work. It’s the sort of matter-of-fact acceptance of the magnitude of bhakti that straddles calendar art and qawwalis).
My one complaint, given how thoughtful the work is, is that Patil hasn’t deviated enough from the bigoted artistic tradition of colourism that codes darker skin tones for the poor, the asuras and the lower-caste, while Vishnu and Shiva are elevated to blue. Her palette is more complicated than the stark offensiveness of Amar Chitra Kathas, and she has jungle-roaming rishis satisfyingly tanned dark, but in the face of centuries of skin politics and anti-Dalit and anti-Dravidian rhetoric, it would have been nice if her art could have challenged the misinterpretation of “krishna” as blue instead of black.
Adi Parva is eponymously the beginning, and this volume ends with a recently widowed Kunti contemplating her return to Hastinapur with five young sons. We have yet to see what Patil will make of Arjun and Subhadra, Karna and Draupadi, Yayatsu and Krishna. The actual Mahabharat has not even begun, but already the river of Patil’s imagination is so vast and deep that it does not matter that we cannot see the shore banks. Like the majhi whom we must entrust ourselves to, she seems on a steady course towards the beloved.
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The Whites of Their Eyes: The Tea Party's Revolution and the Battle over American History. By Jill Lepore. (Princeton, NJ: Princeton University Press, 2010. xii, 207pp.).
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- Has the purpose of the book been achieved?
- What contributions does the book make to the field?
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- Are there facts and evidence that have been omitted?
- What kinds of data, if any, are used to support the author's thesis statement?
- Can the same data be interpreted to explain alternate outcomes?
- Is the writing style clear and effective?
- Does the book raise important or provocative issues or topics for discussion
- Does the book bring attention to the need for further research?
- What has been left out?
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- Table of contents -- is it clear? Is it detailed or general? Does it reflect the true contents of the book?
- Author biography -- also found as back matter, the biography of author(s) can be useful in determining the authority of the writer and whether the book builds on prior research or represents new research. In scholarly reviews, noting the author's affiliation can be a factor in helping the reader determine the overall validity of the work [i.e., are they associated with a research center devoted to studying the research problem under investigation].
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- Chronology -- also may be found as back matter, a chronology is generally included to highlight key events related to the subject of the book. Do the entries contribute to the overall work? Is it detailed or very general?
- List of non-textual elements -- a book that contains a lot of charts, photographs, maps, etc. will often list these items after the table of contents in the order that they appear in the text. Is it useful?
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- Appendix -- is the supplementary material in the appendix or appendices well organized? Do they relate to the contents or appear superfluous? Does it contain any essential information that would have been more appropriately integrated into the text?
- Index -- there may be separate indexes for names and subjects or one integrated index. Is the indexing thorough and accurate? Are elements used, such as, bold or italic fonts to help identify specific places in the book? Does the index include "see also" references to direct you to related topics?
- Glossary of Terms -- are the definitions clearly written? Is the glossary comprehensive or are there key terms missing? Are any terms or concepts mentioned in the text not included that should have been?
- Footnotes/Endnotes -- examine any footnotes or endnotes as you read from chapter to chapter. Do they provide important additional information? Do they clarify or extend points made in the body of the text? Should any notes have been better integrated into the text rather than separated?
- Bibliography/References/Further Readings -- review any bibliography, list of references to sources, and/or further readings the author may have included. What kinds of sources appear [e.g., primary or secondary, recent or old, scholarly or popular, etc.]? How does the author make use of them? Be sure to note important omissions of sources that you believe should have been utilized, including important digital resources or archival collections.
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